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| Digital Art / Photomanipulation / Fantasy | ©2012-2013 *Wesley-Souza |
and jorgeremmy 
Children by Eirian-stock 
Water by Badinstinct 
Lamp by AnnaPaar 
Seahorses , fish and underwater plants by jinxmim 
Coral by Tigers stock 
vines by MaureenOlder 
Sea Chest by Moonchilde Stock 
Bear by Tefee-stock 
Bubble by me Tentacles [purchased] [link]
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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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You did a really great job capturing amazing, vibrant colors, and this piece has a lot of creativity and imagination. Your vision is very unique and effective, and it makes an interesting statement.
You did an OK job with blending in general, although the foreground could use a bit more blending with the background in terms of tone/hue and lighting. It kind-of looks like the foreground (the colorful stuff at the bottom) was pasted into the picture rather than really being integrated into the scene. I can tell that that's really not the case, but it is something to think about for future deviations.
I think the biggest problem for me in this deviation is that the "underwater" part doesn't look real. I like the tones and the feeling of the light coming through the windows, and of course you added bubbles here and there.... but overall it doesn't appear to be underwater; it just looks blue. You could edit that with a bit of texture, or considering how light is refracted underwater and makes ripples of light, etc.
Composition-wise, the eye is drawn to the tentacles and then to the little girl only secondarily; is that what you intended?
Finally, you have three sources of light, which is really difficult to work with in terms of shadow! But, think about where that light would fall and where the shadows would make things darker. Things have shadows, even underwater. But, overall, you worked hard to get those sources of light to be consistent, and you can tell you put a lot of time into it. Think, too, about what the different "strengths" of the light would be and therefore how much glow (and what color) they would be casting on their surroundings.
Overall, I was really excited to see this piece in our gallery because it is so fresh and unique. I think you've got a ton of talent, and I really look forward to seeing what you come up with in the future!!
I hope you enjoy my critique and that your day is well.
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